Post by scrattelover2 on Aug 10, 2010 18:03:32 GMT -5
Please note that it is rated T for Violence/Gore and Language. Changed from the original version, which wasn't well written at it, Rated M for Graphic Violence and Strong Language.
Some times it will be written like it is a movie, I don't know why I write like that, I just do. I took the introduction from Shriek and Destory's introduction and added in what I think happened when the shot switched to outside the shed.
I just writing this on how I think Tremors 5 should go, but there will be a few parts that are shocking (violence) that you would never see in a Tremors movie too. But not until chapter three.
Here's Chapter 1.
In Perfection, Nevada a man is up on his roof, he is hammering his hammer on the roof of his house. He hits it really hard on the steel, and he hears an animal screeching.
He starts hammering again, hears the screaming again, and the building starts shaking. He runs over to the edge of his barn, looks down, and sees bloodied chickens flying out the coop.
He climbs down his ladder, and runs to his house. He opens the door, and is holding a shotgun, he sees the creature that was making all the noise, he points his shotgun at it.
He pumps it, but when he pulls the trigger, it dosen't fire.
The creature charges at him, bites into him, and starts ripping his belly open, he starts screaming as it rips his organs out. It rips out his stomach, tosses it to the ground, and starts ripping his intestines out.
It grabs his leg, and rips it clean off, it walks over to the body parts laying on the ground, and starts eating them while he is screaming. It remembers he's there, and runs at him again, the camera switches to outside the barn, and he is heard screaming. The screaming stops, all goes silent, and crunching is heard.
Three days later...
A shrieker is heard growling and Rosalita is seen running with a small pack of Shriekers behind her.
She holds her radio up to her mouth, and says, "Burt! Help! Shriekers! Answ..."
Burt hears her get cut off, he picks his radio up, and begins speaking into it, and says, "Rosalita! Do you copy?! Do you copy?! Damn it!"
He picks up his M4A1, and quickly rushes up his stairs.
After driving for a while, he sees five shriekers standing close to the store.
He steps out of the truck and aims his gun at the shriekers.
They look towards him, open up their heat sensors, they see a red spot and the outline of Burt's truck.
They all begin screeching loudly, and running towards Burt.
Burt opens fire on the shriekers, and they drop one... by... one... spraying orange blood on the ground.
Burt uses the last of his clip on a shrieker that stops a few feet away from, and he kills it.
He draws out a silver pistol, .50 caliber Desert Eagle, and slowly walks towards store.
He opens the door, and Rosalita comes out of it.
She says, "Burt... I thought that we killed all the shriekers! Was there another graboid?"
Burt responds, "I don't know. But we have to get Tyler, Nancy, Jodi, Mindy, Melvin, and get to my house, quick."
Rosalita hops in the back with the M4 in her arms, already loaded, with a 90 round magazine.
Burt walks into the store, heads into the back of it, where he finds Jodi.
He says, "Jodi. Come with us, we have shriekers on the loose. We're going to get the others and get to my bunker."
Jodi says, "Okay, what about Melvin? I though you hate him."
Burt responds, "I do. But I hate seeing people, even ones like him getting killed by shriekers."
They step out of the store, Burt steps up into his truck and Jodi hops in the back with Rosalita.
Burt starts up the truck, the engine roars, and he begins driving.
They stop the truck at Nancy's house, who comes running out of the house with Mindy when they hear Burt's truck.
Mindy says, "Burt, what's going on?"
Burt says, "There's shrieker's on the loose in the valley. Get in the back of the truck. Do you know where Tyler and Melvin are?"
Mindy says, "Tyler's in his shed, and Melvin, who knows where he is. Last I saw him, he was out in the desert."
Burt says, "Nancy, Mindy, go get Tyler, and wait in there for us to come back, we'll go get Melvin."
They run over to Tyler's shed, Mindy opens the door, and they run inside.
There, Tyler asks, "What's going on? I heard gunshots."
Nancy says, "There's apparently shriekers on the loose. Burt's going to go get Melvin, then come back for us, and we're all going to his house."
Burt is still driving his truck across a trail in the desert, he sees someone walking out in the desert on a rock and says, "That's Melvin. What the hell is he doing out here?"
Rosalita says, "Who knows. Let's just get him in the truck and out of here."
Burt drives his truck up to the rock, and yells, "Melvin! Get in the truck quick! There's shriekers on the loose, we're going to get Nancy, Mindy and Tyler, then we're going to go to my house."
Melvin runs across the rock to Burt's truck, he quickly jumps into the truck, and their wrist seismos start beeping.
Melvin says, "Oh shit! Go Burt! El Blanco's coming! Hurry!" Burt starts up his truck, and begins driving.
A mound of dirt comes up where Burt's truck once was, and it follows the truck.
He drives up onto a rock, and drives across it with the worm following them along side the rock.
Burt tosses one of his vests into the back and says, "Pull the pins and throw these at El Blanco, it should scare him off!"
Melvin and Rosalita both pick up two grenades each. They pull the pins with the teeth and they toss them at El Blanco.
They spit the pins out, all three get down, and they grenades explode.
El Blanco turns the other way, and burrows off into the desert.
Melvin says, "It worked. Now let's get the others."
A few minutes later...
Burt pulls up to the Tyler's shed, they coming running out, and they jump into the Burt's truck.
Ten minutes later...
The group quickly runs down the stairs, where Burt punches his security code in to the pad, and they all walk through the door.
It shuts behind them.
Burt walks over to his desk and he sets his gun down with the magazine next to it.
Melvin says, "What are we going to do about the shriekers? Do you have enough guns?"
Burt says, "Melvin, look behind you."
He looks behind himself, and sees a wall of guns, M16s, AKs, Norincos, Shotguns, Pistols, Revolvers, Sniper Rifles, Hunting Rifles, and Burt's barrett.
Melvin says, "Never mind then."
Burt says, "Okay, I still have to get satelitte imagery of the shriekers, before we head on up."
They all head over to the computer, which begins scanning for the shriekers.
Burt catches a glimpse of multiple red dots on the screen and says, "There's 250 shriekers..."
Melvin says, "Damn it! How much food did they get?!"
Burt says, "Well, all I know is. I'm gonna need alot of help killing them, Tyler, Rosalita, Mindy, Melvin, your all coming up with me to shoot at the shriekers. Take the round drums there, they each have a hundred ones in them. It should be more than enough, when the shriekers get here."
Tyler says, "How about we set a fire outside to draw them in."
Burt says, "Yeah, that's a good idea."
Burt grabs up two containers of gasoline, along with Tyler and Melvin, who all begin running up the stairs with them.
Some times it will be written like it is a movie, I don't know why I write like that, I just do. I took the introduction from Shriek and Destory's introduction and added in what I think happened when the shot switched to outside the shed.
I just writing this on how I think Tremors 5 should go, but there will be a few parts that are shocking (violence) that you would never see in a Tremors movie too. But not until chapter three.
Here's Chapter 1.
In Perfection, Nevada a man is up on his roof, he is hammering his hammer on the roof of his house. He hits it really hard on the steel, and he hears an animal screeching.
He starts hammering again, hears the screaming again, and the building starts shaking. He runs over to the edge of his barn, looks down, and sees bloodied chickens flying out the coop.
He climbs down his ladder, and runs to his house. He opens the door, and is holding a shotgun, he sees the creature that was making all the noise, he points his shotgun at it.
He pumps it, but when he pulls the trigger, it dosen't fire.
The creature charges at him, bites into him, and starts ripping his belly open, he starts screaming as it rips his organs out. It rips out his stomach, tosses it to the ground, and starts ripping his intestines out.
It grabs his leg, and rips it clean off, it walks over to the body parts laying on the ground, and starts eating them while he is screaming. It remembers he's there, and runs at him again, the camera switches to outside the barn, and he is heard screaming. The screaming stops, all goes silent, and crunching is heard.
Three days later...
A shrieker is heard growling and Rosalita is seen running with a small pack of Shriekers behind her.
She holds her radio up to her mouth, and says, "Burt! Help! Shriekers! Answ..."
Burt hears her get cut off, he picks his radio up, and begins speaking into it, and says, "Rosalita! Do you copy?! Do you copy?! Damn it!"
He picks up his M4A1, and quickly rushes up his stairs.
After driving for a while, he sees five shriekers standing close to the store.
He steps out of the truck and aims his gun at the shriekers.
They look towards him, open up their heat sensors, they see a red spot and the outline of Burt's truck.
They all begin screeching loudly, and running towards Burt.
Burt opens fire on the shriekers, and they drop one... by... one... spraying orange blood on the ground.
Burt uses the last of his clip on a shrieker that stops a few feet away from, and he kills it.
He draws out a silver pistol, .50 caliber Desert Eagle, and slowly walks towards store.
He opens the door, and Rosalita comes out of it.
She says, "Burt... I thought that we killed all the shriekers! Was there another graboid?"
Burt responds, "I don't know. But we have to get Tyler, Nancy, Jodi, Mindy, Melvin, and get to my house, quick."
Rosalita hops in the back with the M4 in her arms, already loaded, with a 90 round magazine.
Burt walks into the store, heads into the back of it, where he finds Jodi.
He says, "Jodi. Come with us, we have shriekers on the loose. We're going to get the others and get to my bunker."
Jodi says, "Okay, what about Melvin? I though you hate him."
Burt responds, "I do. But I hate seeing people, even ones like him getting killed by shriekers."
They step out of the store, Burt steps up into his truck and Jodi hops in the back with Rosalita.
Burt starts up the truck, the engine roars, and he begins driving.
They stop the truck at Nancy's house, who comes running out of the house with Mindy when they hear Burt's truck.
Mindy says, "Burt, what's going on?"
Burt says, "There's shrieker's on the loose in the valley. Get in the back of the truck. Do you know where Tyler and Melvin are?"
Mindy says, "Tyler's in his shed, and Melvin, who knows where he is. Last I saw him, he was out in the desert."
Burt says, "Nancy, Mindy, go get Tyler, and wait in there for us to come back, we'll go get Melvin."
They run over to Tyler's shed, Mindy opens the door, and they run inside.
There, Tyler asks, "What's going on? I heard gunshots."
Nancy says, "There's apparently shriekers on the loose. Burt's going to go get Melvin, then come back for us, and we're all going to his house."
Burt is still driving his truck across a trail in the desert, he sees someone walking out in the desert on a rock and says, "That's Melvin. What the hell is he doing out here?"
Rosalita says, "Who knows. Let's just get him in the truck and out of here."
Burt drives his truck up to the rock, and yells, "Melvin! Get in the truck quick! There's shriekers on the loose, we're going to get Nancy, Mindy and Tyler, then we're going to go to my house."
Melvin runs across the rock to Burt's truck, he quickly jumps into the truck, and their wrist seismos start beeping.
Melvin says, "Oh shit! Go Burt! El Blanco's coming! Hurry!" Burt starts up his truck, and begins driving.
A mound of dirt comes up where Burt's truck once was, and it follows the truck.
He drives up onto a rock, and drives across it with the worm following them along side the rock.
Burt tosses one of his vests into the back and says, "Pull the pins and throw these at El Blanco, it should scare him off!"
Melvin and Rosalita both pick up two grenades each. They pull the pins with the teeth and they toss them at El Blanco.
They spit the pins out, all three get down, and they grenades explode.
El Blanco turns the other way, and burrows off into the desert.
Melvin says, "It worked. Now let's get the others."
A few minutes later...
Burt pulls up to the Tyler's shed, they coming running out, and they jump into the Burt's truck.
Ten minutes later...
The group quickly runs down the stairs, where Burt punches his security code in to the pad, and they all walk through the door.
It shuts behind them.
Burt walks over to his desk and he sets his gun down with the magazine next to it.
Melvin says, "What are we going to do about the shriekers? Do you have enough guns?"
Burt says, "Melvin, look behind you."
He looks behind himself, and sees a wall of guns, M16s, AKs, Norincos, Shotguns, Pistols, Revolvers, Sniper Rifles, Hunting Rifles, and Burt's barrett.
Melvin says, "Never mind then."
Burt says, "Okay, I still have to get satelitte imagery of the shriekers, before we head on up."
They all head over to the computer, which begins scanning for the shriekers.
Burt catches a glimpse of multiple red dots on the screen and says, "There's 250 shriekers..."
Melvin says, "Damn it! How much food did they get?!"
Burt says, "Well, all I know is. I'm gonna need alot of help killing them, Tyler, Rosalita, Mindy, Melvin, your all coming up with me to shoot at the shriekers. Take the round drums there, they each have a hundred ones in them. It should be more than enough, when the shriekers get here."
Tyler says, "How about we set a fire outside to draw them in."
Burt says, "Yeah, that's a good idea."
Burt grabs up two containers of gasoline, along with Tyler and Melvin, who all begin running up the stairs with them.