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Post by zero on Jun 17, 2010 21:19:01 GMT -5
have graboids in space!
predators (movie creature) hunting graboids?
graboids and dinosaurs, time travel some random humans
have new haracters and locations, dont use existing ones....
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Post by project412 on Jun 18, 2010 14:15:08 GMT -5
Why change the old characters? The characters in the movies are great. Tremors is not about the monsters, it is about the characters and their relations, and how they work together in order to overcome the threat.
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Post by Niall on Jun 19, 2010 20:42:32 GMT -5
have graboids in space! predators (movie creature) hunting graboids? graboids and dinosaurs, time travel some random humans have new characters and locations, dont use existing ones.... 1. How/Why would someone bring a Graboid to space and also in space theres no Dirt/Soil for a Graboid to move in, Also blows the whole 'Cannon' Part out of the window 2. Getting Copyright for your Idea would be a Bitch; actualy close to impossible. 3. Could work. But The idea was to set it as a Cannon Novel - Like an Episode of the Series. -- Oh, And ive kinda 'written' in Graboid Eggs. During the Entire book theres been almost No rain. So right at the end ~ Say One Month After Burt and the Feds have finished we flip to a dead Assblaster Decaying. Close to it a Racoon or Something is Digging up Graboid Eggs the AssBlaster concevied and Burried before it Died. Racoon runs away because it starts Raining... Out pop Baby Graboids. And Finish. And - Any more Ideas before i Post a Draft Story Arc . (EG: A Chapter be chapter whats Going on) and then start Writing.
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Post by project412 on Jun 20, 2010 6:55:42 GMT -5
One thing about that idea, the AB can only lay one egg, not multiple.
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Post by Niall on Jun 20, 2010 10:52:02 GMT -5
Thanks for Info - That was the one thing i did know. Thanks 412
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Post by project412 on Jun 20, 2010 16:10:39 GMT -5
No problem. Only thing is, since Tremors 5 never came out, we don't know if the AB lives or dies after it lays the egg. 5 was gonna show us that...
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Post by Niall on Jun 20, 2010 16:34:27 GMT -5
I thourght it would Die - Like when a Graboid and Shrieker technically die when they Change.
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Post by project412 on Jun 20, 2010 18:16:19 GMT -5
You're probably right. I always had a theory that the food coma allows their body to create another egg, but that is just my theory, and should not be treated as canon.
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Post by BurtGummer on Jul 8, 2010 12:52:30 GMT -5
Maybe we can include like a gravesite location for Old Fred and Miguel who were killed. What have you got so far?
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Post by project412 on Jul 8, 2010 19:02:47 GMT -5
If we do that, we need to add the guy who died at the beginning of Tremors (his name is slipping my mind at the moment, but the one on the radio tower) and the Doctor's wife (odds are, they probably dug out that jeep eventually.
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Post by BurtGummer on Jul 9, 2010 11:07:18 GMT -5
Edgar was the guy on the radio tower. The doctors wife and husband need to be included. Maybe Burt at the beginning saying something like "About nine years ago we were digging for Graboid eggs and we ground Doc's wife trapped in her station wagon. I remember Val mentioning it, but never cared to dig it up. Seeing it was a sight" or something like that. In order to get more of my ideas though, I need Niall to tell me where we're at.
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Post by Niall on Jul 10, 2010 9:04:27 GMT -5
Wow Burt - You know your stuff So far, due to the fact he story is under some Development I have only Written the First chapter. But I can change that at anytime; The Story Arc I was originaly writing for is below: Chapter 1: Twitchel giving Burt A Job, Tyler convincing Burt to Go to Mexico. Chapter 2: Burt and Tyler traveling to Mexico and get to the Village that needs help. Asks for Infomation. Chapter 3: The 'fed's' are introduced. We discover that the 'fed's' Team is made up of 2 P.E.T.A volunteer, 2 Official members of the E.P.A and two Game hunters. It is explained that they want to capture the Graboids and study them. Chapter 4: Burt and Tyler head out - RV Cars and Guns a'plenty. Kill the first of Four Graboids, Continue hunting for the other three. Chapter 5: Burt and Tyler discover the remains of Graboid Number two, Shreikers have been born. The village is attcked and Burt and Tyler race off to help the Village. Chapter 6: Burt and Tyler reach the village to see only a few people are Dead, the 'Feds' Killed most of the shriekers Bar Two. Which they have captured. Burt explaines 'Nicely' that you cant contain Shreikers. Thus the 'T3' Argument Rises from the dead. Chapter 7: Its now a race, Can Burt kill the remaining Two Graboids before they are attemptedly Captured. He tracks down Number three and after A old style 'T1' Burt Vs Graboid (Because this graboid has learned that eating RV Cars are bad) Burt and Tyler Hunt down Number Four. Chapter 8: Burt and Tyler reach Graboid Number Four - Which has somehow been tranqulised. Burt trys to convince the 'feds' to kill the graboid and the Two shreikers thay have already collected. But they make Burt an offer. If Burt and Tyler help them into leading the Graboid into there specialy made truck they woud provide him with the only Tranquilers that effect Graboids. Tyler thinking that these Tranquilers could help them keep a tab on El' Blanco attacks. He convinces Burt to Help. Chapter 9: the 'feds' Drive away, Burt and Tyer return to the Village and Help tidy up. And get payed. They agree to spent some time in the Village, like a Holidy (Tylers idea, Burt is just looking for any remaining Shreikers.) A day or so latter Jodi apears, Looking for her much wanted 'Shreiker' parts. Chapter 10. As Burt, Jodi and Tyler are just leaving the Village. Twitchel apears and explains that the Shreikers changed into Assblasters which melted through the Truck walls and set them selfs free. Eating the 'Feds' and alowing the fourth Graboid to escape. Burt fearing a Shreiker development aswell as the current AssBlaster problem. Desides to Not go back to America. But destroy the remaining Graboids and Assblasters. The chapter will end as Burt kills the last Graboid. Chapter 11: Now there are Two assblasters, And Twitchel has escaped back to America. Leaving Burt, Tyler and Jodi left with low amounts of amo. Basicly kinda a Nothing new chapter. Burt finds assblaster, Assblasters attacks them etc. Chapter 12: Tyler shoots down One of the Assblasters. But before they can investergate were it crashed. Tyler left the Engine if Burts (Badass) Car on. The car is badly dammaged meaning they must walk. Jodi explains how this reminds her of what happened last time a Assblaster attacked (T3) Chapter 13: They locate the last Assblaster, kills it. Returns to Village and Informs Twitchel (Via Phone) that all threats have been Neutralised. They are all coming home. They begin to Drive home. Chapter 14: Kinda of an Epilog. They are all back in Perfection about two weeks latter, discussing the events that have passed in Mexico. El Blanco makes a small Cameo as the ground begins shake and they all do the usual No one moves. After El Blanco passes by they all begin to talk about Normal stuff. Then the Book swiches back to mexico were the assblaster that was shot down layed a Graboid Egg before dying. Which has been Dug up by an Animal. It begins to rain. Egg Hatches -- That was the Original story Burt. If you feel changes must be made - Go ahead and speak your mind.
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Post by project412 on Jul 10, 2010 9:57:03 GMT -5
Wow dude, thats awesome!!!
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Post by Niall on Jul 10, 2010 13:26:42 GMT -5
Thanks 412, and I should warn you all, my writing style is like my favourite authors; Dmitry Glukhovsky, Sergei Lukyanenko & Michael Crichton - Its very Detaled; Meaning that although my 14 chapters may sound short. They will Be long. Which I guess would help reach my 100 - 150 pages goal, making it a Short Novel. P.S And yes two of my Three favourite authors are Russian P.S.S Im British - I just have an Intrest Russian Books, Films and Games.
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Post by BurtGummer on Jul 10, 2010 13:56:55 GMT -5
That kicks ass man. And yes, I remember all the Tremors films very well. I just watched them so much. Are you actually gonna try and get this published? Have you started writing?
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